Comments : 730 Days Of Lies

  • 17 years ago

    by Danni

    That's sad and I can totally relate. Just put your chin up high grit your teeth and plunge into it all and you'll come out the winner.
    ~Danni~

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Good poem, but I think some of the lines were a bit long and didnt quite fit the flow. The words were awesome and the thought was so sad. Over all, great job! 5/5