This is a very good poem david, i can tell you really love this girl, keep it up, i give it a 5/5!!!

I applaud you for your bravery but boo you for assuming that ALL guys dont tell their girl how they feel about them. No i'm not a guy, i'm just a girl who has seen the more tender side of many guys. Now about the actual poem. The flow is all off and the ryhme at times seems soo forced. Yet the emotion pulled at me, you could almost feel how much you love her and for that alone bravo.