Oh my God, I loved this poem it was amazing... I've this way before and to hear it from someone else was touching... true or not It touched me... Keep it up... If you got time check out some of my work..

Hey that was pretty good. did u write that for a contest? i think i saw it... anyways, i liked it, the only thing i saw was with the flow in the first stanza...
"I've lost my dreams, hopes and way.
I've lost it all, but my love for you shall stay."
the last line was too long and so it didnt flow as well as it could. maybe change it to "I've lost it all, but my love shall stay"? but i know that the 'for you' part is important....
well, 5/5 anyways :)

Wonderful peice of poetry here. I loved it. The flow was good and the structure was too. The lines I felt where a little lengthy. Once again, a wonderful write.

Peace, Joe