I also know a thing or 2 about being tormented. 5/5

That's terribly sad. It like totally brought tears to my eyes! =[ But I do agree with you on this poem and I know that this is the way I feel about my school. You never see a geeky girl with the popular girl, it just dosen't happen. Sad to say that but it's true. Great flow and good vocabulary! 5/5 Keep it up!

Stephanie

Popular guy* lol

That was really good
i gave it a 5/5
oh and i posted something on the x-mas topic in discussion that'll get u as my friend

Oh this is really sad. but 5/5!!

This piece was quite wonderfully tear-jerking. You precisely have captured the emotions through writing this one. It's so heartrending and unbelievably true. In school, we treated everyone equally--at least that's how it is mostly in our homeland...

Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.
Love,
Debbie

Wow i can kind of relate to this it made me want to cry!!! you should check out my poems and comment

Okay. Weird. Me and Kait [on this site & in the club] just wrote a poem about how opposites attract. I loved this write, it was like exactly like how poem. Weirdness! I love it though darling, you did a fabulous job :] It was cute! 5/5

OOOPS.
You can definatly disregard my first comment. Let me actually READ the entire poem. Lol. I totally inferred by just reading the first two stanzas. My bad. This poem was very sad. Apperently these people didn't ATTRACTS. They were complete opposites. Sad write! :\ Gahh. This really does truly happen in life though! Good job. 5/5.