Your pain can be felt in your words of losing someone you are still in love with. Good job Debby

I remember reading this when I was young and feeling so sad that someone broke your heart. You have always been a beautiful, intelligent and very talented woman.

"....the day we met I loved you then
It seems that's how it's always been."

That last couplet is what i can relate to the most..
One of your best, it's so full of pure emotion, it radiates from the words..
Very impressive poem..
Well done..
5/5
*Gem*

AWwww. That's sad but so beautiful!
Keep up the wonderful work!
Thank you very much for commenting my poems. It meant alot to me.
God Bless 5/5

~tay

Owch! owch! Owch! OWCH!
burning words, full of love.....
full of hurt.....just wish it wasn't so....