I really liked the flow.. but what I didn't like about this is that you used gentle and gently wayy to often.. almost practically in every line.. try to use a different word. but that has the same meaning.. good try though and keep up the good work 4/5

Good usage of words..
It had beautiful well penned imagery..which was supported by Good flow too..
And the choice of words was also nice...
Good job for a nature poem!=)
5/5
xxPoojaxx

This my dear, is simply beautiful.
The imagery you used in this blew me away, and the poem itself left me with a relaxed, contented feeling.
Beautiful flow throughout, and this was wrapped up beautifully.

"As [leafs] rustle," -- leaves.

"[Sunrays] gently [kiss] the faces of children."

This little piece endears me completely. I always adore nature poems, and this is no exception. I, however, sense that you should expant this. It seems to be a mere portion of an even greater poem. Despite the seeming fact about an unnatural flow, the neat imagery pleases my mind'e eye exceedingly. That is just me, I suppose.

Nice work, nonetheless. I gave it a 5/5!

Marian

My apologies. I meant to say 'expand', not 'expant'.

I adore poems about nature and this one is so serene:)
Really a pleasure to read:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Excellent imagery.
Your words painted a wonderful picture.
What can I say; It was beautiful.

5/5
-Paula

Lovely