Wow the flow in that poem was amazing and I loved the topic. I know exactly how that feels to watch the one you love, love someone else. In my case it was my best friend. But all I have to say is never give up. He realized that he cared for me and he was missing the greatest thing that was right in front of him. Sadly my story didn't have the greatest ending due to the fact that as soon as he figured that out and we were going to be together his mother shipped him off to live with his father in Idaho, haven't seen him since.

Awww poor thing I know what it's like to have the person you like like someone else lol sryy for all the likes if that makes any sence at all

Nice, is this one about stephen too? I liked it... Like the first person to write a comment said: great flow, but i wish you would have made it longer. Of course... I can't talk since mine are short too, lol