It was an unusual poem but I liked the ending despite that it was sad. My one suggestion is to work on the flow of the last line in your 2nd stanza. It doesn't read well. But other than that, good job!
Charisma*

Lol #4 comments.
Charisma*

Ok you're a officially in my favorites. So amazing, ...Me...! I can't wait to read more! lol....really, you are really good. Keep it up!
~Midnight Sun