It was a good poem, I liked it. Seems like you have a good friendship with someone. Keep it.

The rhyme scheme was very.. weird. Started of ABAB, then moved to AABB.
Good flow, and it was powerful. Good work.

Great poem alot of thought put in it i can tell

Wonderful poem. Keep up the great work. You are a great poet. Never stop writing. 5/5 :)

Wow this is a powerful poem, great.

Fabulous poem,, i can see the love and good friendship. it nicely written great choice of words. the flow was great well keep it up and u do a great job... 5/5

Wow, this was really good,
it made me want to read more, you have done really a great job, one of the all time favorite poem that I ever read.....
keep up the great job and i will be back to read more of your great works.
a 5 from me as you really deserve it.

peace

Goran

This was really good. The emotional was expressed very well. It sounds like a special poem that means a lot. I really enjoyed reading.

I love this poem. you are an amazing poet. there were only a few things/problems.
1. I keep thinking, my thoughts are in so deep

what does this mean? because i do not understand it at all. lol

2.But I don't want to just sit there
What I want is to make things lighter

this seemed like a very forced rhyme. that didnt succeed.

3.
I can't say I love you, not yet
Because when I do, it means forever
For now I like you and I won't forget
How you saved me from life's despair
a. the first line i think is too short. maybe add a word(ex. just) after not.
b. forever / depair i am sorry to admit. do not rhyme. at all. this got me mad. because if they did it would rock. lol

4. fone-PHone

`Now for the good.
i love love love this stanza*even with fone)
Endless tears were already shed
Whether on the fone or in my bed
Yet everything seems worthwhile
When you comfort and make me smile

it is so relatable to anyone with a wonderous friend. =]

also i loved how you changed your rhyme scheme all the time. it kept my interest.

Great Job.

xx3 Lauren

I loved this poem, it was filled with thought and also made me think!
excellent poem!

-Naomi

Hey this is surprisingly insperational and well written i really enjoyed reading it. :P
~Kyra~

Nice poem, very well written and explain alot, 5/5

I enjoyed this.
My favourites part was

Tried to change the things I did
But turning back time, God had forbid

I can really relate to that.

I liked how you switched the rhyme scheme around.

I enjoyed the wording muchly, and I thought this was very well written.

Great poem! keep up the good work..can u return the favor and comment on my poems ansd quotes..thanks!

I like...I like very much!

Well this great poem maker is my school mate.. im proud to be her school mate. cause she is a unique person and a person who likes poems.. well this poem is really great and i hope u make many more poems TC A.O. =)

This poem is amazing and the words you've written are so true. love should be forever in a perfect world but it seldom ever seems to be. amazing job and great flow 5/5

This is a very nice poem...
love the word and i understood every bit of it... its amazing... it has alot of meanings in the poem...