I love your poem keep up the great work!

It is beautiful, short but still very powerful, you described emotions superbly. I don't prefer love poetry but this piece is great! It really deserves 5/5

I always enjoy looking at peoples' older work because you get to see how much they've grown as a writer and you're no exception. I really enjoyed reading this and thought that it created a really mysterious almost creepy atmosphere but can see the improvement in your writing.

Em xXx

PS The repetition of the word "almost" was really effective