Comments : Look at this: my mended heart

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I really like this poem. I feel that U can really relate and many others could, as well. You showed your feelings very well through this, and the rhyming added a really cool effect.
    Good luck with Leeds!!
    God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Another great poem. That I can relate to right now. Keep up the good work:) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    The final stanza was catchy though I fel the word you took me out of the world you as the poet was trying to create. I was prepared to be mesmerized by the feelings of your words. Simple words but they did have a nice ring to them.