I love you poem keep up the great work

One of ur better ones, the rhyming is done brilliant and it explains so much, sounds like something i went through in school..

I think that there are many girls who feel like this. Wonderful job getting out your emotions.
Though I do feel that your rhyming was a little forced it some areas, it was really good! Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Good poem, and I like how you bring it all together, and yes sometimes we find ourselves shock with a good looking guy pay us attention...GP

This poem is really good. It says what any normal girl in that situation might think. I lurve it.

Hi, thanx for the comment on my poem! i like this one! it was the same with me, so... hang in there girl!

Narc xxx

I really liked this poem...it remembers me my own school with only three groups: the nerds, the cool and the freaks (i'm on third, yeah...)
okay, now speaking about the poem:
the flow is very nice...
the poem shows the thought of any girl in a similar situation...
it's pretty much...AWESOME
5/5
keep going
*isabel*