Comments : Fire the gate of hell reside within

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    You worded this amazingly,
    and though I'm quite fond of rhyming,
    this didn't need it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by GIRL IN LOVE

    This is an wonderful poem, i hope since you have all that pain you don't go and do something stupod and try to kill yourself. please check out my poems, most are about love and a couple are said poems. Live a comment thanks and i love your work