Comments : Trading Places

  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Oh wow...this is excellent...

  • 17 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Amazing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Now that is a poem that everyone should read before judging others. Especially at this time of year..
    You write so strongly and powerfully with such in-depth message in your words.
    I can only hope that one day i'll be as good as you =)
    5/5 for sure
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    Your words are so affecting. I'm moved by the depth of your sorrow and love and pain in all your poems

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh wow...
    This was amazing!
    I have tears in my eyes yet again...
    That last stanza was so powerful, and the whole poem had so much impact.
    Marvelous work!

  • 14 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Absolutley amazing poem, wish the whole world could read and consider this. might make a slight difference to how people act.

    you have wrote this well, i do not know what illness you have but what it is clear is that you are a fighter and are not one to give up.

    well done for writing this, and thanks again for sharing another wonderful poem with a clear inspiring message xxx