This is so true, i think that so many people have felt this way before... I love your poetry it has a way of making people picture what you have written... Great job!!!

I love your poem, i can totally relate to what your writing about, I've been in the situation before. Love gives us the greatest feeling in the world, but it also brings with it the greatest pain. I though your poem had good flow and excellent wording. I give it a 5/5 thank you for sharing your talent!

Great poem! I really loved it and some of the imagery you used was amazing!
Charisma*

You only get one chance to find that once in a life time love. i would hate to see that slip by. Your heart talks to you. we just sometimes chose to ignore it. I am glad I listioned to mine. Even though God took him away to soon. You are very talented. Your feelings shine through. Take Care.

Very nice write. good job. would make a good song

Gd