Comments : To the blade...

  • 17 years ago

    by Nil

    Keep fighting it's a hard thing to stop. Also I liked this poem. It was short and sweet.

  • 17 years ago

    by A New Beginning

    Short but good. i enjoyed it. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Superb!

  • 17 years ago

    by Christie

    I like this poem. it shows the two realities of cutting, the need for it, yet the realisation that its not the way.

    in few words, u have said so many more. 5/5!
    keep writing!
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is such a problem with young people. Maybe it's because it is just talked about now, where before it was hidden. Writing about it is a great way of healing. Very excellent job on the write!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Short but sweet. loved the detailing again..it was great. it was really good for being so short. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Short and shocking.
    It's the harsh reality and unfortunatly i can relate to what your saying in this piece.
    You did an excellent job though in portraying this habit.
    Well done..
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by tiffany

    I feel the same way.
    very good

  • 17 years ago

    by Naima

    So good. So deep...

  • 17 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    I wouldn't change a thing it is excellent! Short and to the point!