Hi. Thank you for your comment on my poem. I'm glad you liked it. I will be writing more. I already have part 2 and 3 written. Your writting is amazing as well. It is very creative and I hope to read more of your writing soon.

Great poem very deep and dark. definetly a 5 in my book

Again, truly excellent work.
This is another of my favourite's of your's, I think I will have to make my way through each of your poems =)

Tis a great poem
very well written
lots of emotion
and pain
tis sad
you used a great chose of words in it
good job
and thx for the comment

Keenan

Very deep poem, do hope things have changed. it hurts when we compare ourseleves to stray dogs on the streets and how they are treated.... but they too get a second chance and can lead better lives wit happy days xxxx

Wonderful rhyming poem with a great flow.
Well written.
All the best,
Ben