I can feel the deep pain in your words. It makes me want to cry with you.

If you want to know i just showed my gf the poem dance.... and she loved it. and gave it that name.

i thank you for all the comments. i will continue to write them tomorrow.

this one tho. I LOVE. its different. and very true. i gave it a 5. go you. you are a great poet! a very very good poet.

David

Wow! this one is amazing it really touched me, because i can relate to it
:( its an amazing write again :))