I really enjoyed reading your poem. Outstanding job! Keep up the great work!

"You have come again to haunt my dreams
And pull back the covers of my heart."

You has some beautiful imagery here.
Really gorgeous.
5/5
*Gem*

How refreshing it is to read something in this category which I would consider completely original. You use of words and the way you pieced them together made this a beautiful read. Truely touching. Thanks for sharing this.
Oh and thanks for the comment on my poem.
Take care,
Silver J.

This poem is very well written, the imagery is very good and the meaning is deep. "how long the breath of love has lay dormant" really amazing. Excellent write 5/5

Wow! your words just drew me right in to this piece. Excellent!

Very beautiful, sad piece. I love the imagery throughout. Enjoyed reading it.

This is such a captivating poem. What incredible imagery! Lately I find myself taking that same lonely journey, what feels like way too often. Thank you for your comment and I will definitely be reading more of your writing. Best wishes for the New Year,

~dandy~

I like that. I understand it. It was about a love that was once taken but has returned and is welcomed like it was never gone.. You are a fantastic writer.

A very vivid dream you have there. I like your line about her pulling back the covers of your heart. That was truly beautiful. This poem was very well done!
Charisma*

Beautiful, romantic and spiritual. A lovely poem Tom

Very good write. i enjoyed reading it. nice word selection.

Beautiful imagery. I like the metaphors. Nice job.5/5

I love this poem!! your words are so deeply placed. Keep up the good work. I cant wait to read more.

Your poetry is beautiful, i enjoyed reading your poems, and hope to read more, when i read your poetry i see, fell, hear, smell and taste everything.
thank you for the lovely comment. i hope you leave more and any tips you have for me.
you are an amazing writer 5/5
xx take care xx

Very nice!! thanks for the visit!!

Wonderful flow,
I like how this is written.
I also Appreciate the comment..
People like you have helped mold writers like myself..
Once again,
Thanks.
Jonathan.

Hello
this was ur first poem i read and i honstly was amazed by it...its very passionate and excellent in everyway...
i will be reading more of your poems and i shall comment as i go..
by the way thanks for ur comment,,,,means alot to me

Wow. I can't even begin to describe how beautiful that was. All I can say is after I read this piece, I thought to myself "I wish I could write like that.."

This is beautifully written

Oh the love in this poem was amazingly real. it was magic and the effect it had on me was heart throbbing. well done and keep these excellent poems coming.

5/5 David