That was a really sweet poem, it kinda made me sad, but i liked it.

,Heidi

Wow... that hit a sad spot in me. atleast you were lucky enough to have him... just always remeber that

"We'd lay in the sun all afternoon trying to get a tan."

That line made me smile, its exactly the kind of thing i try to do now, except i just go pink and then pale again, lol

"All I know is I ache for you.
And our times together, just us two."

And as i continued reading the tears started seeping... it;s so bittersweet but as always excellently written...
5/5
*Gem*

Such beautiful work on such a sad subject.
You have true talent, and I am sorry you have had to deal with so much pain.
This was truly a wonderful write.

Im so sorry life has treated you this way. this poem is very good, you start off by sying all the time in the world, then that time is shortened and took away. makes you relaise how little we do know about what life will bring us.

please never stop fighting. never stop writing either. xx