Comments : This friendship we've formed

  • 19 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    First off, I liked these lines the most.
    I love the way you smile and the way you say you care,
    I can always depend on you cos I know your always there.
    Good job with those.
    Secondly, in your 7th line it reads, "says" Isn't it supposed to be days??? Just a typo I saw.
    And thirdly, lol, I like that it rhymes, and friendship poems are generally sweet, the only thing I didn't like was your last line. I feel it was a little forced and too overused. Just an opinion that you don't have to listen to, but thought I'd throw that out there.
    Charisma*