Comments : To the girl

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    The last couple lines didn't rhyme like the rest, and I wish they did to keep up with the orinal scheme of it all. But it's an endearing poem about that someone who makes you feel better than you thought was possible, and makes you see things in yourself you never thought you had. Glad you put that thought out there.
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Sooooooo cute! I have a friend like this. Her name is Danielle and she's always there for me. Great job!
    xoxo