This brings back lots of memories 4 me things that i dont wana remember till i realised thats in the past and now im looking forward to the future. thanks xx

Beautiful poem...I rly enjoyed readind it
I liked especially this part:
"These hands, they feel as empty
As my lonely soul inside.
And though you're gone, my love for you
Was never born to hide."

That was an amzing poem hun. i loved the whole ieda and u made it in such great detail.

love ya lots,
sore

I loved this read! I really enjoyed the first opening stanza:

"Another moonlit coffee mug
Lay in my hands of doubt
Drinking up your memory,
To water down this droubt."

I thought this stanza had wonderful rhyming, great flow, and i just really liked it. Thought i thought you should of used another word apart from "doubt" again in the third line. But still i really liekd the image, drinking up your memory. Great!
The rest of the poem was also great, the first ne was just nmy fave stanza, thje poem had a good flow, good rhyming, and was quite sad. Keep up the great work! xx