Wow you're really good!

Thank you. I wrote this poem last year when I was in a major fight wiht my best friend and I was kinda depressed around that time. But we're friends again now and things are ok. Thanks to all who read my work and vote and/or comment! Best of luck to all of you!

~K3!$3Y~

Aww...an unusual ending like you want them there even though they did what they did, but the earlier part of the poem makes you feel so angry with the person. The first few lines really drew me in and kept me and your title and catch line was great! My only suggestion is to work on keeping the lines around the same length...
Charisma*

It is very original i can totally relate visit mine too please