This is a really awesome poem just you need to change the second to last line to he will no longer be his mothers own instead of he will not longer be his mothers own. But otherwise I love the poem. Keep up the work.

Mel ,another great poem and unfortunitely there are many kids going through sinilar things out there in the world,very sad. ( have you ever read (THE LOST BOY) this poem reminds me of it. great job.