Great poem very well written
keep up the good work

I like ur poems hun dont let any1 get ya down bout ur work ach peace is special to u otha wise u wouldnt wrte it
take care
xx

Hey i like it, ryhmes very good too. Keep it up i really did like it. Has a good story line to it. GREAT WORK!!

Ariana you are a great writier and with that i know you are truly an amazing person...dont let anyone tell u different either.,,i loved it alot...dont every stop

Very good keep it up =)

Awesome poem. keep up the great work!