Way to go, This is it. A very good write. Loved the depth you put in this.

Outside of these two lines, the flow was great.
"But what proof is there that things will work out
This time I have only allows room for more doubt."

Outstanding imagery. You should be proud of this, Charisma. [By the way, what is your real name].

Keep it up, my friend.

Happiness
Jeannie