Hey i like it. you have a good choice in words. keep it up.

U r right, true luv iz ere where. Sum ppl r just 2 blind 2 see it. They dont know dat true love iz something dat last 4evr. Keep up da good work.

Stay Playa,
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Like i said on ur other poem...AWESOME JOB!!!!!!!!! these poems tht u write describe so much tht i couldn't describe! they help me with alot of stuff tht i was confused about!!