Good Job! Keep up with the writing especially if you enjoy it!

This is a very good sedoka jenna, flows great, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Awe sweety. this was a good poem. differnt style. i loved reading it. it brought me in and kept me there. i love the imagery. good job.

-Terra

This was a another well done piece. My one suggestion would be to use another expression other than, 'slams the bottle down' only because I've seen it in your other poems a couple of times. But if this was my first time stumbling upon your work, and I'd never read your other poems, I'd say you perfectly entertwined words of anger and sorrow throughout!
Charisma*

Short yet jam-packed w/ greatness. loved the detailing...it really painted a picture! 5/5