Sweeite this is realy deep and realy painful, i could feel things i havent felt in a long time...well done honey x0x0

This is a really good poem! i like it alot!
amanda

Hey your poem is really good and like how u said i commented yours and will to some more. I think u could be a great poet well
Love always,
Jessica

Love how u wrote it...one of best ive read...

Your poems are really deep and really catchy to they tell the world about and the way you feel too. Keep on writting and maybe you can check out mine.

Oi,chica AWESOME poem ..i mean...like,totally.

n the ending was just SUPERB..lovin it ^^

o n .btw..thx fr d comment =D

Hey hun...the poem is deep,touching and painful...filled with emotions...very powerful work!....Good job!..Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

That was amazing. When i read this it seemed so deep and personal.

I liked this a lot. i hope you are feeling okay. keep writing :)
~Kuro