It is a very powerful piece. Excellent flow to it.

If a guy is playing you then he probaly isn't worth the effort.

Very good poem. It's got a great use of imagery like the rusty plank, being pulled back around the bend, and the WHOLE 2nd stanza. great job, though it's sad...
Charisma*

Very good poem. It's got a great use of imagery like the rusty plank, being pulled back around the bend, and the WHOLE 2nd stanza. great job, though it's sad...
Charisma*

"I've noticed you've been treating me
Like a records that's been scratched
A photo that's seen better days
Or a tire that's been patched"

This is a great stanza!! I loved the poem!
xoxo

P.S. Of course I care about your problems. I'm glad that my poem reminded you of him, but I guess that's not a good thing. I hope he sees what he is missing. You seem like a very nice person. Don't worry about it hun. If not him, you'll find someone that loves you very much! I hope you find a guy for New Years. Good luck darling!