Good poem. I really liked this one!
I think that your word moonlight is supposed to be moonlit with the context you are using, so that's a suggestion!
Charisma*

I like this, i was actually going to write a poem like this
i always thought that a message in a bottle would be cool idea- so well done

;) thanks for readin my poem

Very good, Karl, if you are online can you try to contact me somehow? thanks in advanced

Good poem!! i think it really shows emotion!! and thanks for the comment!

This is such a great, sweet poem. You did a really good job with it. It flows well too.
5/5!

`Ange!a

Thank you! it's beautiful just like me and u..

Its' just gorgeus, Loved it. Your poetry is awesome and you are too underated! keep writing =]

Pip xxx

Very good poem and sweet. I really like it. My favorit lines are

will be walking hand in hand
underneath the moonlit sky

Because I can picture it and that is what I hope for some day. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Very well done. 5/5

This was a very sweet poem and I think that you did an awsome job on it. The imagery that poped into my mind was beautiful. 5/5

Alyson

Thats good wish we could all find love like that

Good job, karl.
this was so sweet, imagery was great and wording was well done.
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Another knock out man! This was excellent, loved it. Hopefully we can all find the person who finds our message ina bottle sooner or later! Hope you find yours man, well done again.

I loved this poem.. beautiful flow and i loved the idea, so romantic and old-fashioned, yet beautiful! wonderful write 5/5

I liked this, I thought the imagery was amazing, it really captured me.
I'm going to add you to my favourites.

Your very talented, this is a great poem, keep it up!!

Hi, wow, this is a great poem, it's wonderful, and your very good and talented!!!! Sam

Wow, this is pretty good! i love it! a message in a bottle and away sails my thoughts to a dream land!

Narc xxx

Theres is a rele sweet poem i lyk it alot its different to any love poem good job sweetie xxxxxxxxxx

I have been impressed by all of your poems so far..You have so much talent for writting.. This poem showed a lot of emotion and was very well worded... Great job...5/5
Tyanna