Comments : A message in a bottle

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Good poem. I really liked this one!
    I think that your word moonlight is supposed to be moonlit with the context you are using, so that's a suggestion!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    I like this, i was actually going to write a poem like this
    i always thought that a message in a bottle would be cool idea- so well done

    ;) thanks for readin my poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Darkbreath

    Very good, Karl, if you are online can you try to contact me somehow? thanks in advanced

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    Good poem!! i think it really shows emotion!! and thanks for the comment!

  • 17 years ago

    by fearose

    This is such a great, sweet poem. You did a really good job with it. It flows well too.
    5/5!

    `Ange!a

  • 17 years ago

    by tinna

    Thank you! it's beautiful just like me and u..

  • 17 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    Its' just gorgeus, Loved it. Your poetry is awesome and you are too underated! keep writing =]

    Pip xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem and sweet. I really like it. My favorit lines are

    will be walking hand in hand
    underneath the moonlit sky

    Because I can picture it and that is what I hope for some day. Keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very well done. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    This was a very sweet poem and I think that you did an awsome job on it. The imagery that poped into my mind was beautiful. 5/5

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by Bianca

    Thats good wish we could all find love like that

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Good job, karl.
    this was so sweet, imagery was great and wording was well done.
    xxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by The Undoing

    Another knock out man! This was excellent, loved it. Hopefully we can all find the person who finds our message ina bottle sooner or later! Hope you find yours man, well done again.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    I loved this poem.. beautiful flow and i loved the idea, so romantic and old-fashioned, yet beautiful! wonderful write 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this, I thought the imagery was amazing, it really captured me.
    I'm going to add you to my favourites.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Your very talented, this is a great poem, keep it up!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sammie Jo

    Hi, wow, this is a great poem, it's wonderful, and your very good and talented!!!! Sam

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Wow, this is pretty good! i love it! a message in a bottle and away sails my thoughts to a dream land!

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by J4Y

    Theres is a rele sweet poem i lyk it alot its different to any love poem good job sweetie xxxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by tyanna

    I have been impressed by all of your poems so far..You have so much talent for writting.. This poem showed a lot of emotion and was very well worded... Great job...5/5
    Tyanna