by Brittany C
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Great poem. I can agree with this one. I like it. Another 5/5 |
by LadyWaszky
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Eh. i dont like it. i liked the beginning.. but it stopped flowing mid 2nd stanza. whered the rs fly off to? xD |
by x.Athame.x
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I like the idea, and agree, but it needs a better flow and a more consistent rhyme scheme. :) |
by leinhart
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Nice one hehe |
by Stephanie
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Hehe. I think that we all feel this way about school at one point in our lives. Especially the boredom. =] Great job, keep it up! 5/5 |
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Plz die... |