Extremely short. I think you could have written more and expressed your feelings and emotions more. However, what you did have was very good. I like the rhyming a lot.

Very short.
I agree that you could have put in more emotions, but I thought this was well written.

Wow excellent poem, except it is very short, I'd like to see this a little longer than just 4 lines. Other than that, I thought your words and the flow where excellent.

Peace, Joe

Aww wow this is really short, but it said so much in those few words. i really liked the rhmying in it. great job! 5/5

~Kristina

Really short like everyone has said, but the words used made it a great read! Had a good flow, but seriously i think you need to add another stanza to it. It just felt incomplete...
Still good job!
xx

Great poem. Though I do think that it should be a little longer. Other then that please don't change it. I can relate to this poem. I like it. :)

Too short. That's the only problem I have with it. It was so great with just what you have, though it could be excellent, if you would write more. Though I do think that you got quite a bit of emotions out in this one. =] Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Short but sweet!!! good job!