Wow. I had cold chills while reading this and that is unusal. I really think you should keep up the good work. =]

I liked this one alot alot!
lol
i really enjoy your work Jeff
keep it up

Wow....loved it jeff! its so powerful, my fav part was the "let yourself go let your spirit come with me" so sweet and beautifully written, thanks for comments on mine too:)