Athamae...i have to say,

Blue eyes are watching
Loves notions taking hold
Locks of hair; hiding face
Oh dear; Heart will race

u know, he has blue eyes, and curly brown hair...

~amore~

"Sweet intoxication within
Drowning in emotions
Insides a passionate fire
Overflowing, burning desire"

You doing brilliantly!
You use such beautiful words such as in the stanza above to get the point across and you always have such depth to the simplest lines..
Excellent
5/5
*Gem*

This was great! loved. it vry well written. keep it up. xx

U r only 13... and your poem is embellished with such feelings!!!!
u r endowed with inexhaustible fund of romanticism..!!!!

god bless