Every single word makes sense and i could relate myself to them, to be honets it seems as u hv written for me.. :o)

all the best & take care

Thanks for the comment on my poem i really appreciate it... this is a really good poem i really like it..
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Your rhyming here was superb. It flowed brilliantly and didn't seem forced at all. Once again, the emotion was greatly conveyed, too. Very, very nice work. :)

Very good poem. I can relate. Keep up the good work and please never change this poem it is great the way it is. 5/5

Well written poem. It was short but i really enjoyed reading this poem! I liked the flow Good job!

This is very interesting, and there is a good flow. well this is pretty good i know so just keep it up and keep on writing all what u feel! god bless i give u 4/8

Beautiful... i loved the words, the flow, the pleading emotions, everything about this poem... great job!!! 5/5

I'm not sure I understand. (Maybe because I don't know what eloquence is XP) But is it about not being sure it they love you back? And being afraid of putting your heart on the line? I thnk I get it. Lovely way to portray the feelings though. Made MY stomach twist a bit too, just thinking about it.

Beautifully written . I think the flow is good, and the choice of words was good . It has many emotions mixed in with it, I feel, but the poem is just good .
..__MiNDYY

A wonderful poem, great write. Best wishes, and blessed be. 5/5

I can really relate to the poem. I like how the poem flowed but at some points i was like "whoa is this girl committing suiced?" but good poem. keep writting.

I loved this poem, the message was so powerful, that we sometimes fear others reactions, the flow was great and the choice of words was great to, excellent job 5/5

Hey thats a really pretty poem. there wasnt a great variety of words and the imagery needs work but all around its beautifully written and the flow really works for the poem! Great Job! 4/5

I loved this...it was so sweet and full of hope.
I think it could be better with more imagery, but apart from that you did a wonderful job!

Omygosh!!!! this poe is amazing!!! it flows so so well. there's so much emotion, and i love your word choice!!! great job!!

Forever*Yours

One thing I've noticed already is you have a great choice of titles, it automatically draws the reader in before they've even began the poem; it's a great tool!
This was a very emotional, on the edge poem; it had me gritting my teeth lol.
I do think it was well written, and the only critisism I have is that the rhyme "too" and "true" is quite predictable compared to the other rhymes.
Good job though, keep it up.

I LOVE IT!

Aw.. cute poem.. the emotion is good but not great.. the rhymes are good and the flow is perfect.. a little cliche but still a nice write