Very good poem. It would make a good begaining to a story. I liked it a lot because I like fairies. 5/5

I LOVE THIS POEM IT IS GREAT!! ILOVE IT BECAUSE OF THE FAIRIES..... WOULDNT IT BE NICE IF WE HAD FARIES!

This is a great italian sonnet. great structure and flow, i give it a 5!!! keep it up!!!

Beautiful job. just a few things...
"Dancing around gladly their at their prime,"

Do you mean "they're at their prime"

All lines were great and original. But I know what you're capable of and I think you can make the fifth line stronger. Keep it up

Hey nice poem!! im gunna have to check out tha rest of ur work!! thanx for tha inspiring read!! :D

Definantly deserves higher.
Again-almost flawless.
the only two lines i would look at are.
For the end will very soon come to the day.
Dancing around gladly their at their prime,
the first line seems childish, and choppy. it seems slighty as though you couldn't find a rhyme, or something. and the second their-they're.

But thats it! downvoters suck. =[ this was a very well written sonnet. =]