Comments : The Day You Went Away

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    In between every syllable and every word lies a sense of pain that i think anyone can feel in their heart, i know i sure did. The only thing i think we can really do to help slowly heal the pain is know that we will be re-united with our loved ones one day, to complete the journey we started with them. Loved this poem

    xxBonnie

  • 17 years ago

    by stix

    This poem is very good i like it alot and its so sweet you really miss him huh?

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Now this one made me cry, i don't care if i'm in college, lol.
    Whenever i think of losing Marcus due to circumstances i can't control, i feel empty..
    So i can half relate to this poem
    But as always, despite the pain it took to write, its well written..
    5 to you..
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    More tears for me from reading this...
    I liked this because it had so much depth and feeling, I enjoyed the wording muchly.

  • 14 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I can relate to this one very much, i was there when my soul mate took ill, and i remember when he fell and i just knew he wasnt going to make it.

    very powerful poem again, one in which only very few will relate to.. but one that noone should ever have to relate to.

    xxx