A good poem. Very strong in subject, and very well done with the rhymes. Can't wait to read more of your work!
Charisma*

Wow that was a very different poem not one i have ran into yet. you are really skilled at poetry. no one thinks that you are weak but sometimes you need someone to hear you speak your concerns and you cant do that to your kids b.c you dont want to show them the hurt in life. but there are people out there that really care and listen to the hurt,pain, and they comment your poems just as i but some to afraid b.c you know of the internet freaks which you arent one but keep writing as good as you do and we will know and comment our opinions and try to help!
keep up your strength some look up to you if i could write poems like you omg. and i love someone but its not working out bc i screwed up so dont think people arent listening. k
love soloangel

I think the opposite. I think your poems actually show how strong a person you are and how your kids come before all else. And everyone on this site is here for you. I know i listen and always come back to check your poems i love them. Take care
And this poem was absolutely tremedous, excellent story and you made it fit together so well.

Kelly
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You can always email me if you like :)
And no i do not think you're weak everyone goes thru some lifes great battle, Im still fighting mine :) i actually admire you madam and look up to people like you :) and whats more you're a great poet and i do LOVE your work :)))

Hey cathy this is an exellent poem your feelings were well expressed

Well written and expressed! I dnt think ure weak at ol,grl.U very strong,en i admire u for ur strength,being there for ur kids en ol:)i love ur work,well done..

Cathy I wish you well in everything you do. You will suceed. I can tell you are strong. Great write.

I was just wandering thro the site & came across this one & i must confess...this is a lovely piece...you really have a very good talent though i am no one to judge that....but i cant stop myself too... :o)

Seems like an effortless beauty...
5/5
all the best and take care

The great thing about poetry is it can be an self-help mechanism to get us through the darker days, and also a brilliant way of demonstrating to the world that some of our viulnerabilities can be channelled into great strengths. So while this is not that great a piece of poetry (some of the rhyming is off, or seemingly forced) it's still a compelling read because it's telling a story rather than just an "oh woe is me" rant against the world.

Not a bad effort at all. :-)

How unique. Simple but strong. Sweet and sad. Nice job!

I really feel for u your story sounds like a girl i know....
stay strong i dont know u but u semm to make me feel like u have the stregth... xXx