Hye, taht was really good. well written, strong, emoitonal. Very powerful.

I really did love this poem. it was excellent. 5/5 nice work.
-Suzie

Although I'm in theARMY, I got to give my respects to marines as well. My grandfather was a marine. It had a nice flow and for those who wouldn't understand how a marine feels, they'll have a much better insight now

Hey, awesome poem. im obbsessed with the marine corps. but im not gonna join (only bc im a girl and its too masculine even for me being the tomboy that i am) anyways, 5/5 good job.

Great poem thanks