I liked it it was really good..and akwardly enough i could relate to it..in someway.

A unique write displaying emotions I'm sure everyone feels. One suggestion is revising these lines because the first one uses feel twice in the same line, and in this case, it sounds wrong. And in the second one lacks flow.
You feel as though no one knows how you feel
the more you say the more the pain is real

I would suggest:
You believe no one knows how you feel
And the more you say, the more pain is real

Lol I clicked submit before I was done. Just wanted to say, that was an opinion so take it or leave it. But anyhooo....it was well done!
Charisma*