The flow was good.. only, i think, you should've made the last stanza better.. 4/5
almost there! nice work in general..

Awesome poem its got some pwerful words in there that gets the point across good job and i aint talk to ya in a while so i thought id say hi... and again this poem is awesome good job it is very well done i love it

keenan

Wat a great emotional poem. i loved the way you set it all out and the ending was very strong and purposeful.

5/5 David

This is fantastic and im sure i will remember u if u say wat other names u have called urself on this site lol because i dont know u by words hurt well anyways this is an awesome poem rely power in it and thx for the comment

keenan

Oh i remember u know sry but i just didnt remember u as words hurt but pathetic mistakes i remember sort of :D

keenan

Lmao i doubt anyone there even remembers me other then u i dont know maybe i will wat is the club called now??

keenan

TORMY! I DEMAND you to write MORE poems! >_<

==Hehehe, peaceee.==

On the whole, this is wicked. I haven't read such an emotive poem from raw emotions that tugged my heart like this one! I'm really delighted to have read this piece. So emotional... so strong... so wicked! bravo... bravo.. bravo! STILL I DEMAND MORE POEMS FROM YOU! lol

luff yeww!
Debbie cakes

Hmm... kinda rocky in some parts... flow was pretty good.. not 5/5 but still pretty good

Hmm... kinda rocky in some parts... flow was pretty good.. not 5/5 but still pretty good

Hmm... kinda rocky in some parts... flow was pretty good.. not 5/5 but still pretty good

Hmm... kinda rocky in some parts... flow was pretty good.. not 5/5 but still pretty good