Great piece Nice ending

Wonderful peace a literature...Love the style you write your poems...Keep up with it

Wonderful peace a literature...Love the style you write your poems...Keep up with it

Wonderful peace a literature...Love the style you write your poems...Keep up with it

That was really good.i liked it...so far i havent seen anything that needs improving all i can say is keep up the good work!

Aww..what a sweet poem. Beautiful, simple, and pure. A nice ending too. Great job!