Short and sweet. well, not really sweet, but it was good! the only suggestion is that the first line of the first two stanzas are the same...dont know if its just me, but it might sound better if you chaged the second one
something like this:

I nearly DECEIVED YOU
I nearly broke your heart
I feel like such a bastard
For trying to tear you apart

or something, i know that wasnt very good, but you get the point, right?
otherwise, good as always 5/5

I LOVE THIS POEM & I DONT THINK YOU SHOULD CHANGE ANY THING ABOUT IT BECAUSE IT'S ORIGINAL & BEAUTIFUL

**Jesi*