Wow awesome job loved it 5/5

The way that you told what happened after the battle was beautiful. There was a wonderful flow to it. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

A great poem with a deep message. keep it up

I really enjoyed this, I thought the imagery you used was amazing, even though at times it creeped me out.
I think you did a wonderful job on this.

I love the last 3 lines... you should of just taken those....