This is a great poem about nature becuase it's hard to write about sometimes but you did an excellent job with this one 5/5 smokey the bear once said only you can prevent forest fires. Well i dunno smokey excellent poem lol

This is a great little short poem,very vivid imagery,capturing the essence of a forest fire5

I like it but i think that you should add a middle verse.

Wow, ur poem was really really great, n i give it a 5/5, keep on writing

Woah! This poem is really great! Its quite short but still very beautiful and the discriptions were great! Nature poems are hard to write, ive only tried it once but you did an excellent job! Keep it up! xx

Very good poem. I could picture the fire and ash. I loved it. Keep up the good work. 5/5

I really liked this poem. Very descripitive.

I liked your rhymes, they were good, and it flowed nicely. The imagery was also good. Your lanuage definitely added to the detailed imagery in this poem. Well done.

You're right i love it a lot!
i love the use of vocabulary. THere's so much speculation i could put into the poem... it's sooo good!
Keep writing!
5/5
~Stevie

You're right i love it a lot!
i love the use of vocabulary. THere's so much speculation i could put into the poem... it's sooo good!
Keep writing!
5/5
~Stevie

I've never written 'nature' poems...so I've never really read them either. But I'm glad I read this one. This was excellent. Love your use of words. Beautiful write. Never stop writing!! Kay? ;) Take care.

`Liz

Wow. Powerful yet short poem. Beautiful and flawless flow, except for the last line
"All the once lived here has died"
should be
"All that once lived here has died"

Other than that, this is an incredible poem. Keep writing!
5/5
~Stevie

I commented on it twice cause i reread it, and then i noticed the last line
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if not, it's okay!

I really loved this. For me your word choice embodied the poetic essence of fire. Although the piece is short for me the second half stood out slightly more simply because the firt three lines are so elegant and somewhat beautiful, followed by the final line which brings the reader back to harsh reality, Wonderful 5/5

I love this poem it's amazing, I also love your pic! that's awesome! thank you for commenting!

I really liked this poem, it can mean so many different things. well done

much love and many kisses,
bex

This is very nicely done. I liked how short it was but you got right to it and you made it flow well and it made sense.

This is really good! The flow of it was awesome and i loved how you wrote straight to the point. AWSUM JOB!