Awesome imagery and just so u know im a gurl my poem i will always love her was me trying ot get inside my bfs head lol but yes i am gonna share it with him...thnxs good luck

lissa

Just dont lose hope if this one hasnt been voted appropriately, may be thats coz of the writing pattern as it doesnt seem as a poem, but if u ask my personal opinion, whatever coming right from heart is what matters to me & i could feel the emotions flowing from every single word here...so keep them coming.

Great write indeed

all the best and take care