Now, why would i yell at you about how awful this poem is?

it wasn't awful to begin with.

Awwwh, this was really sweet!
I loved the imagery you used, that really captured me.
I think you did a wonderful job on this.

No way! I could never yell at you!

This was simply amazing.=] So sweet and enjoyable to read. The imagery was perfect. It drew me in.

The flow was great. Overall, wonderful job. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

So beautiful